smiles pass by
and so many casuals
sticking as if not sticking
sticking for temporary purpose
….
the world has always been like that
and so was myself
delusional
sticking to ideals
and they smile…as they are someways
elder
they know…they teach
create and paid for being responsible
….
and me younger
always younger
…
either you talk more to be…
elder
or you talk more of your business to be younger
elder…
i really like the way you structured this poem
ya…seems…there is a style emerging…which you call structure….
thanks