when?

Standard

when taking over

is possible

when drowning is plausible

when thanking is defeatable

when blurring is eye opener

when loving is fallible

when pain is enjoying

when deep is surfacial

when thought is physical

when real is debatable

when life is virtual

when borrowed is valuable

when pain is sweet

and knowledge is ridicule

when beauty is explainable

when i am in love

and its acceptable

when

??

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4 responses »

  1. I love this. It almost describes depression as well as all your other tags.
    I absolutely these lines;

    “when pain is enjoying

    when deep is surfacial

    when thought is physical

    when real is debatable

    when life is virtual”

    did you finish it because doesn’t really sound done
    your poems are beautiful, I’ll be reading your blog regularly from now on.

  2. I’ll tell you when

    When you are in love my friend

    When your love is not to defend

    When you take life as it comes

    When with you river runs

    When you live breath by breath

    When you fear no death

    When you sing with the birds

    And flock about with herds

    When you dance in the rain

    When you smile in the pain

    When you say when no more

    When within you are for sure

    When you let the love be

    When you let not love be greed

    When you let love be fleeting experience

    When you let be your fragrance

    Smile and question no more

    Smile the nature is to adore

    ……………..

    You motivated me to write ….Thanx!! 🙂

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